End Of Another Day Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Hi Nosheen, Beautiful poem, again on sunset. Another sun goes down Another day makes an exit Slithers like an eel from the clutching hands.... This is exactly how I am feeling right now! The exquisite images of skies of unconquerable dreams and lover dreaming with eyes of illusion really make it. And to crown, we have THE POET ALIVE IN HIS VERSES. Fantastic. I just wanted to ask Nosheen, Why not HER verses? 10 of course.

End of day's dreams, especially those of lovers. are filled with fantasy and wishful thinking that can come back to harshly disappoint. Thank goodness for poetry to provide a vent

The details in this poem of events happening simultaneously at the end of another day are well-observed inn their variety and ultimate harmony as good things in our mortal world. But something happens between the lines of this poem. It steadily creates an atmosphere of both excitement and quietude that so many good things are available without cost or even effort. They descend upon us and those who are alert receive them with quiet or noisy gratitude, depending on their personalities. As I read your poem, I felt I could just stretch out my arms and a cornucopia would fall into them. And all I have to give in return is good will to others. And so your poem is also a vision of how good life can be if we match its goodness with our own.

Simply beautiful...... I love the way you have incorporated so much in this delicate yet powerful write! !

The sky hosts stars and moon The earth is choked with cravings And the poet is alive in his verses. Beautiful lines of a lovely poem.

After a hard day's work! Thanks for sharing.

Superb.....and the poets are for sure alive in their verses.....Another day gone to history book...Loved it, wonderful poem, Nosheen..Nothing less than 10++++

simplicity is the beauty of poem. always it isn't easy to deliver simply. nice poem

simplicity is the beauty of poem. always it isn't easy to deliver simply. nice poe