I clutch your embrace
To my bosom, ripe,
With youth and love.
I know not how,
I can live without
The warmth
In your arms I find
Myself hungry
Every now and then
The shores
Of your embrace
So inviting
I could not resist
Such an open
Heart as yours, where
I make my
Humble abode till death
Do us apart
Sequel to poet Sadiqullah Khan's
poem unending embrace......
thank you Sadiq
' The shores of your embrace ', absolutely. A great line. Fabulous. Clear and concise. No wasted words. Perhaps, could have been even shorter. But the reader of such will not complain. Highly recommended. GW62
great 'loving response'...pleasing to read...expressive lines good poetic elements with in...10
You respond to love like a lioness on the prey, , , , , , lovely, ,10 +
Reshma! A beautiful sequel - no other poem, could equal! ! *10*! ! Great read! Best wishes! Friend Thad
This is a poet of meetings and I like them very much. I'm remembering the words from a song performed by Natalie Cole: 'Out of your embrace, the world is a temporary parking place...'
what a wonderful poem, you know what its not quite often to hear these words I'm so impressed by this poem I must say that, ......keep it Up! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Embrace of love and hope seducely written!