Embrace Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Embrace

Rating: 5.0


I clutch your embrace
To my bosom, ripe,
With youth and love.
I know not how,
I can live without
The warmth
In your arms I find
Myself hungry
Every now and then
The shores
Of your embrace
So inviting
I could not resist
Such an open
Heart as yours, where
I make my
Humble abode till death
Do us apart

Sequel to poet Sadiqullah Khan's
poem unending embrace......
thank you Sadiq

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 October 2008

Embrace of love and hope seducely written!

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 October 2008

' The shores of your embrace ', absolutely. A great line. Fabulous. Clear and concise. No wasted words. Perhaps, could have been even shorter. But the reader of such will not complain. Highly recommended. GW62

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Kesav Easwaran 13 October 2008

great 'loving response'...pleasing to read...expressive lines good poetic elements with in...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 October 2008

You respond to love like a lioness on the prey, , , , , , lovely, ,10 +

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Thad Wilk 10 October 2008

Reshma! A beautiful sequel - no other poem, could equal! ! *10*! ! Great read! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 October 2008

A very beautiful poem. 10+

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Emerald Gk 21 October 2008

oh superb! -------

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 14 October 2008

This is a poet of meetings and I like them very much. I'm remembering the words from a song performed by Natalie Cole: 'Out of your embrace, the world is a temporary parking place...'

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Kholekile Monakali 14 October 2008

what a wonderful poem, you know what its not quite often to hear these words I'm so impressed by this poem I must say that, ......keep it Up! ! ! ! ! !

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premji premji 13 October 2008

eternal embrace... thanks...

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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