Emma… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Your poem is very nice and eloquent to read. Greatly emotion is blended here. True poem 10+

'Tracking stars and moon She moves through times bygone' Rachel Ann Butler

It's a beautiful piece of writing this and a sad lament attatched to it. Reminded me of 'Danny Boy' for some reason------10

very expressive..touching.. voices of grieving hearts... wonderful piece..... looking forward to any further piece on their love's journey.. until we can read their voices of love answered...(smile) very entertaining 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

a song beyond love of words.... tuely form heart of us Walking sad and lone Tracking stars and moon He moves through times bygone… He moves through times bygone… Emma……Emma…Emma! (She loves it...)

A poignant write. A vivid depiction of loneliness of two people in love. A very passionate song of love. Beautifully crafted.

I love this poem, you convey the idea of the poem well. Thank you for your kind words on my poem!

Thank you for your kind revue of my lullaby. Your poem Emma certainly does reflect all the suffering that is caused by wars that are created by a handful of greedy capitalists or fanatic ''wantabes'' I sincerely hope that one day soon the silent majority will stand up and tell these idiots that its time to shut up, be quiet and start acting like human beings. The sun shines for every one on this earth and no one should have the right to deprive others of their happiness no matter how trivial in their eyes this happiness can be.

a grieve of joyous attire, cloth with passion of the heart....such an opulent of the past waited to long to come again in the memory of today..... oh! let the day come again to stay with me.....wishing my emotion to conquer the shield of reality....beautiful my friend...God bless....a 10 +++++

reaches out to the soul....beautifully written..10/10...