duncan wyllie

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Emmy's (Senryus) - Poem by duncan wyllie

I went to the shop,
To buy some nice yellow paint,
For my living room.

I walked home from school,
It was foggy there that day,
I saw a rabbit.

I went to my gym,
I go there when i'm active,
After, I feel fresh.

Emily Wyllie (9)

Comments about Emmy's (Senryus) by duncan wyllie

  • Andrew Blakemore (10/14/2009 12:41:00 PM)

    Excellent work Emily and thank you for posting them Duncan. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (5/12/2006 3:09:00 PM)

    Hey, I started something here didn't I. Very good ones, but I would name them as Senryus not Haikus as they are not of nature or the weather. They are very good Senryus Emily. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2006 5:41:00 AM)

    Well lovely mature Haiku's real nice.........you saw the rabbit very nice.....Dave
    Please say HI to Kim and Emmim
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  • (4/6/2006 5:40:00 AM)

    Runs in the family Duncan. Sweet little Haiku's

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  • (4/6/2006 5:35:00 AM)

    You have worked so well on these darling and to think that these are your first haiku's
    Thanks Ernestine for the inspiration.Love Duncan
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 6, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 12, 2006

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