Emmy's (Senryus) Poem by duncan wyllie

Emmy's (Senryus)

Rating: 5.0


I went to the shop,
To buy some nice yellow paint,
For my living room.

I walked home from school,
It was foggy there that day,
I saw a rabbit.

I went to my gym,
I go there when i'm active,
After, I feel fresh.

Emily Wyllie (9)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 14 October 2009

Excellent work Emily and thank you for posting them Duncan. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ernestine Northover 12 May 2006

Hey, I started something here didn't I. Very good ones, but I would name them as Senryus not Haikus as they are not of nature or the weather. They are very good Senryus Emily. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX

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David Darbyshire 06 April 2006

Well lovely mature Haiku's real nice.........you saw the rabbit very nice.....Dave Please say HI to Kim and Emmim

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Patricia Gale 06 April 2006

Runs in the family Duncan. Sweet little Haiku's Patricia

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Duncan Wyllie 06 April 2006

You have worked so well on these darling and to think that these are your first haiku's Thanks Ernestine for the inspiration.Love Duncan

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