Two Beautiful Flowers Poem by duncan wyllie
Two Beautiful Flowers
I saw you yesterday with that brave smile on your face, and it cut
I tried to look your way with a reassuring smile, but still it cut into me
Both of us now, you with the tears fought back, me with a heart that could so easily crack, as I saw you yesterday with that brave look upon your face
I shall miss you, in ways that I may never find easy to say
And I will cry from a very deep part of me inside
But like the phoenix, though mythical in story
In truth, a simile, I cannot hide
For in your smile my darling, I see something that is born of hope
Something had to die in-order for something to be fixed that was too easily
Broke
But sometimes just as winter has taught me of it's cold
, I shall try hard to numb the feelings that take such a strong hold
I will shake them off with laughter and tears and shout to the heavens.
'Please Lord Keep them well and stand, their side
These two beautiful Angels
A very haunting piece Duncan, written as only you can, best wishes Lynda xx
This poem can be interpreted in so many ways - smiles and similes and the like. Whether your flowers are flowers or metaphors for broken relationships, the emotional underpinning is constant. Beauty and regret shared with optimism. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A very touching poem Duncan with real meaning. A top class work as always. Best wishes, Andrew
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Duncan.
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I could feel the great passion in your writing Duncan, making this a very emotional piece. Excellent production. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Packed with rich emotions... wonderfully stringed together... beautiful write...
Such a sad poem but you can feel the love. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing :)
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I would like to translate this poem
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Strange how a simile can become a smile, when you look at it with just one 'i'? A lovely piece Duncan. Danny