Empty And Broken Hearted* Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

Empty And Broken Hearted*

Rating: 5.0


You'll always be in my heart
From now to eternity
My thoughts will be on you
Ever since I left I felt empty
Something was missing
my body doesn't feel the same
Pieces of me are gone
that will never return again
the tears I cry will only ripple within your name
I'm like a vase
with no water and no love
I miss the days that went by
and the days that will never be once more


With out you is like being on a drained out subway train
Wanting to stay on but wanting off at the same time
Or a scary rollercoaster wanting to get on but last time
You thought it nearly killed you so you want to
Stay away and yet if that one person asked you you'd ride it again

Sitting here wondering if your breathing or not
Is like the echoing in my brain between the two canon walls
Just becoming more and more of a fade in the wind
That fills the space that holds nothing

My heart was once crammed to the top and
Poring out to others
I held it so high once
Then April 11 came along
In that team of seconds
My heart went from high up in the air
Felling my hole entire body with love to
Dragging on the ground bleeding and in pain
Bare drained traumatized and unfilled with love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshan Patel 16 December 2008

awesome! ! ! its so touching n u knw what? ? for a moment i lost in my love days.. plz write more on this subjects..

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Silence Dogood 12 November 2008

I love alot of your lines and the emotion in this poem is well displayed I also love when you compare how you feel to other things like the subway and the rollercoaster

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Heather Hill 07 November 2008

I loved it...I can relate so much....good job! Never quit writing!

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

broken heart....great poem.....

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Melanie Williams 29 September 2008

this broght tears to my eyes. i know exactly the feeling of this poem. Its so close to me........ thank you

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Mrs. Cynosure

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Junction City Oregon
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