Empty Worlds..... Poem by saadat tahir

well i feel empty, stranded and alone all the time...... this is a nice one Sadaat... you know i read your earlier poems about social injustice and you know your childrens day poem...this one shows that you are a versatile writer..well it is only three lines..but language is beautiful..the kinda language that refreshes our sore minds! ! ! 10++ regards shan

A beautiful write Saadat, the worlds become empty and meaningless.... so keep these filled with your sensitive but powerful thoughts! 10+++

Wow excellent theme of the poem, few words make a deep sense.good job sir.

Skilfully composed as always, dear poet friend. Emptiness disappears filled with light of your words.. :) Best wishes. A.

Sadaat, you have said so much in these four lines. master of brevity... empty world, hopeless not even a silver lining- despair and angst comes out so poignantly. 10++ Mamta

Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli

Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.

With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today

very good write! ! luv it! !