Empty Worlds..... Poem by saadat tahir

Empty Worlds.....

Rating: 5.0


Silver lining turned inside out
Focused on the charming rout!
Rest a while at the perfect pout.
Empty be the worlds without.

(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 09 July 2009

short and brief, but it portrays hundreths of meanings..grace

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Jessica Robert 03 July 2009

Nice, sweet little short poem: D Very nicely written, and I absolutely love it Saadat. Your talent is incredible, keep writting! H&K's Jess (:

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Muhammad Ali 02 July 2009

superb it is, nice porm Saadat! 10..

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Duh Huh 22 June 2009

Mamta says it all. Only thing i can add is thank you for sharing your talent :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

An excellent short poem.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 March 2010

Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rehana Nazli 19 August 2009

A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli

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M A 01 August 2009

Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 July 2009

With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today

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Suicidal Magic 11 July 2009

very good write! ! luv it! !

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