Silver lining turned inside out
Focused on the charming rout!
Rest a while at the perfect pout.
Empty be the worlds without.
(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)
Nice, sweet little short poem: D Very nicely written, and I absolutely love it Saadat. Your talent is incredible, keep writting! H&K's Jess (:
Mamta says it all. Only thing i can add is thank you for sharing your talent :)
Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli
Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.
With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
short and brief, but it portrays hundreths of meanings..grace