Empty Worlds..... Poem by saadat tahir

Empty Worlds.....

Rating: 5.0


Silver lining turned inside out
Focused on the charming rout!
Rest a while at the perfect pout.
Empty be the worlds without.

(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)

Monday, June 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: june,silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 09 July 2009

short and brief, but it portrays hundreths of meanings..grace

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Jessica Robert 03 July 2009

Nice, sweet little short poem: D Very nicely written, and I absolutely love it Saadat. Your talent is incredible, keep writting! H&K's Jess (:

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Muhammad Ali 02 July 2009

superb it is, nice porm Saadat! 10..

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Duh Huh 22 June 2009

Mamta says it all. Only thing i can add is thank you for sharing your talent :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

An excellent short poem.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 March 2010

Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rehana Nazli 19 August 2009

A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli

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M A 01 August 2009

Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 July 2009

With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today

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Suicidal Magic 11 July 2009

very good write! ! luv it! !

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