Eskimos Poem by Adryan Barnathan
Eskimos
that is how we kiss
rubbing noses
lip locked
wrapped
in the heat
of our hearts
warm and
entangled
in polar
bliss
exchanging
breaths
that melt
our iglooed
hearts.
Copyright ©2005
Well I am a canuk and was wondering were is the 'rubbing noses'? ? very nice dave xxx
What about the Canadian Hugs? Cuddels? nice poem dave xxxxx
you writing gets better and better every day now! my thoughts are with you! u.xxx
Lovely the way this one flows. I think breathes should be breaths, Gershon
your critique made me realise...that I did rub noses first! thank you~
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 6:49:36 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like this. Very nice, very different and icy-hot in its own little way. Best H