Eternal Love Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Eternal Love

Rating: 5.0


The melting snow neath sunshine's glow,
Reveals the earth beneath my feet,
If you walk on heavens ground,
I hope by chance one day we'll meet.

Through teary eyes i long for you,
To come my way amongst the crowds,
For I will yearn my whole life through,
My thoughts are covered by dark clouds.

Never will I feel the same,
Without you being there for me,
I will miss you everyday,
For love lasts an eternity.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 March 2023

Love it Jayne

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 March 2023

Thank you everyone : ) Much appreciated x

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M. Asim Nehal 29 March 2023

Great write, i agree with comments by Dr. Dillip.

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Pallavi Tripathi 29 March 2023

Amazing wrote! ! Full marks from my side.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2023

Brilliant! Simply a brilliant poem dear poetess....appreciated your perception about eternal love!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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