Evening Is Chirping Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Evening Is Chirping

Rating: 5.0


Chirping, chirping, chirping
Evening flying west is chirping.
Sun is going to set at day end
Darkness calls us it does send.

Birds are coming back to nest,
They will sure here take now rest.
Fest of day is finished in light
After evening will come new night.

Time for rest is you all do feel,
Take rest now but improve zeal.
Pray God sure in pure mind right,
Bright future we hope in flight.

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,lifestyle,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem speaks about evening feeling of daily activity. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

An evening in Deogarh..........Liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2015

A marvelous description of evening that has been made for rest and recreation after a fatigue of a tiring day....10

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Savita Tyagi 30 September 2015

Pray God sure in pure mind right, Bright future we hope in flight. Enjoyed the poem with these lovely lines. Evening is time for reflection and rest and to be thankful for what we have. Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2015

With birds reaching their nests evening chirps. Beautifully described in the poem.

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Ramesh T A 29 September 2015

Day and night scenes are well said in this small poem ending in prayer to God for bright future to come!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 September 2015

After evening will come new light... Bright future we hope in flight. Every new day has hopes for every one and our life too draws hopes of better future.Nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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