Evening Good Evening Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Evening Good Evening
Very, very light, light, good evening,
Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving.
You are father of heaven mercy light,
Evening is glowing becoming bright.
Sunset will tell us about new hope,
Father you ever come near us to cope.
Scope is brought up for men in kind,
Beauty of lovely moment does bind.
After few minutes light will soon hide,
Slowly, slowly night will come near side.
Tide of sea is seen twice with light in sky,
Evening is saying goodbye mind does cry.
Eyes move up and down evening we feel,
Dear father tell us why improves our zeal.
Peeling out chest of sky sun will hide soon,
But we know by love you give kind boon.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,07 September 2017. All rights reserved.
Fantastic poem followed by the aptly picture, all in all I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing..10+++
Peeling out chest of sky sun will hide soon, But we know by love you give kind boon. A good, good morning to you Kumarmani. I enjoyed the poem especially the last two lines and the concluding picture.
I like the line, Evening is saying goodbye mind does cry. Thanks for sharing..
Sunset, though it portents darkness, is one of the most beautiful scenery on earth. I have nevertheless been tired of watching the sunset, wherever I have been. The best, of course is at Kanyakumari, where the confluence of all the three seas permit you to watch both Sunrise and Sunsets.
Seen twice! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem, Kumarmani. Evening is a time for reflection, perhaps solitude, and gratitude. You capture its virtues beautifully.
Evening, so nicely described through beautiful words and lovely lines. Great work.
This is so beautiful in its flowing depiction of evening and then you bring in the Creator of all and it becomes even more beautiful. Outstanding!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving. wisely write, thanks for sharing the poem with us