.... Eyan! The Poet Poem by Eyan Desir

this is beautiful! i love it!

Sited behind the mask Exposing with emotion Determination! That is the poet, actual....Loved it...10+...Brishti

Great work as always really enjoy your use of words Thank you 10++++++

How you present yourself to the world is is being proud of yourself and so you should be, and you don't need a mask! ....+++++10 regards

WOW! ! I love this Poem I think one day (if you really wanted) you could be come a very good poet..Somethine like Jack Perlutsky but with a twist. The way you described this poem made me almost see your feelings i love it! Dont give up and Keep writing -Melissa P.S. im going to read others, hope you dont mind.

am sure i was already at this page...the poet himself, authored his own words by his gleaming lines, by his passion, kindness and thru these skills i appreciate this poet's ability...ian, hope, this will lead to stardom of fame, , as i see ur eyes, it never surrender to the darkness of the night, ..the shadow of your kindness will always inspire my works.....u r the best, u know that...lavs ya...

''Metaphors from his heart Excretes juices of love Buckets of laughter The taste of pleasure The sweetest of sugar'' nice cognitive metaphor, dear Eyan, lovely to read..10+++ from me

It is interesting to read, showing us what goes on inside.

true Beauty comes from withen, I love your style! your smiple grace, the flow, the words, the way words just pore out and always work. you are good! ! ! ! !

real good poem keep it up