Eye-Catcher In The Rays.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
Eye-Catcher In The Rays....
my eye-catcher in the rays….
who knows how many ways
they have been walking, traveling
through heaviest forests and downpouring
to come finally to your enormous gate
must they wait and stay outside then, is that their fate?
i just ask you politely
this is only between you and she
that eye-catcher is all mine,
the eyes have been following through thine
but the matter is still between you and she
i am just the third person singular you'll never meet
your feet must have become tiresome, that's it
and the concrete must have gone arid….
©Sylvia Frances Chan
A.D. Saturday the 27th of October 2018 -
@ 11.58 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
the weather turned out to be warm because the sun rays have come
and the air gets much much warmer.
That's why I wrote this poem, about those moments.
Thank you so much for reading and a bit comment.
Sincerely,
©Sylvia Frances Chan
A.D. Saturday the 27th of October 2018 -
@ 11.59 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
Herfst met mooie zonnestralen, daarom dit gedicht.
Who knows how many ways? ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you so much for your appreciated visit to my poem site, Edward. Kindest of you to pay me a visit again. I appreciate that perpetually. God Bless You Greatest, Edward, Amen.
Through the heaviest forest and through the downpours you have reached up to the enormous gate. Your eye-catcher in the rays knows about many many ways. This is wonderful. Concrete is dry but eye-catcher has taught imagery of autumn and felt the fate of life. The third person is never seen but she watches everything. A brilliant poem is well penned. Cold autumn morning's perception is amazing..10
I am perpetually thankful for your visits I most respect and the precious comments given. Your valuable feedback and the 10´s. Thank you so much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Sir. Your precious comments mean a very lot to me. God Blesses You and your beloved family, Amen.
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/8/2024 9:41:47 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Good rendition of words embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing madam and do remain enriched.
Thank you so much for your sympathetic response, Chinedu. Your visit to my poem site and the wonderful comments are appreciated. God´s Blessings in Abundance be upon you perpetually. Amen