iam not the sun
iam not the moon
iam not the wind
dont expect me to be
just the same
i do expect a return
atleast a thanks
atleast a smile
from all of you
yes you are true. Even do without any cause/without expecting returns nowadays fails.........ole ole ole
indeed...you deserve a smile... a wonderful return of a new Sam? great thoughts...meaningful 10+++
a poem that express and showed humanity...a true and a picture of human weaknesses...thank you and God bless
You definitely merit a smile Samanayan...very nice verse but I agree with Sandra you sound a bit sad and vulnerable....an unconditional 10 from me
Very touching and a bit vulnerable. A warm smile is a gift which should be unconditional.10, for you with a smile. Kind regards, Sandra
sweet and true agaony.... here comes a smile for u.. :) read mine 'Am A Sun'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
For your lovely words alone, you deserve every smile!