Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth
few moments there were.
The days do not complete..
they are followed by the darkest nights..
hotness of summer followed by drought of fall.
a glance to the moon we could have..
yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night..
the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light...........
a changable creatures we are...they are..
each has his reasobanle and un reasonable seasons..
each has his stages of his ages...
The cosmos lacks stability...
that internal..the external state
are exposed to the windy stromy nights...
In the poets' universe each face has many other facets................
Dear TAMARA, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'. Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over.. I liked these lines most: 'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light' Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life Loved the poem Rated 10 RAJKUMAR
this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10
in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara
Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...
A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10
I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is very touching and thought provoking write........