***************facets Of A Night******************** Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

***************facets Of A Night********************

Rating: 3.4


Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth

few moments there were.

The days do not complete..

they are followed by the darkest nights..

hotness of summer followed by drought of fall.

a glance to the moon we could have..

yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night..

the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light...........

a changable creatures we are...they are..

each has his reasobanle and un reasonable seasons..

each has his stages of his ages...

The cosmos lacks stability...

that internal..the external state

are exposed to the windy stromy nights...

In the poets' universe each face has many other facets................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 27 November 2009

It is very touching and thought provoking write........

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 29 October 2009

Dear TAMARA, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'. Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over.. I liked these lines most: 'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light' Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life Loved the poem Rated 10 RAJKUMAR

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2009

this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10

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Mark Nwagwu 28 October 2009

in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara

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Rafique Farooqi 28 October 2009

Wonderful and meaningful poem, i like this poem

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Heather Wilkins 08 July 2013

very touching and thoughtful poem.

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Chisomo Kumwanje 07 January 2013

Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...

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Antonio Liao 24 October 2012

A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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