Terry Biscamp

Rookie - 5 Points (11-7-63 / Texas)

Fairy Tale Love - Poem by Terry Biscamp

Is there really such a thing,
As unconditional pure love?
Or is it just a fairy tale,
That’s only dreamed of?

Who would really hold me,
All through the night?
And truly dry my tears,
And tell me everything’s all right.

Who could look into my eyes,
And honestly feel my soul.
Is there such a thing,
Of never being let go?

Who would not only,
Stand beside me, through thick and thin?
But leap in front of me,
And protect me to the end?

Promises are always made,
Only to be broken.
I think it’s probably best,
To leave all those unspoken.

And if love is such a good thing,
As I always thought it to be.
Then why is it so painful,
Left alone with only memories.

Love is an emotion
Passion felt so extreme
A small sweet taste of Heaven
Until you wake from your dream.


Comments about Fairy Tale Love by Terry Biscamp

  • Clarence Prince (1/24/2017 5:52:00 PM)


    A is great value when it comes along, but may take strength to sustain.... (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (1/24/2017 11:25:00 AM)


    'Is there a thing like unconditional love', the poet asks, because a lover wants his beloved to be there always by his side in thick and thin, to share joys and sorrows, If lover leaves the loved one in time of tribulation, why he feels pain.- - -An intriguing question put through a lovely poem.To quote a stanza from this beautiful poem- -
    Love is an emotion
    Passion felt so extreme
    A small sweet taste of Heaven
    Until you wake from your dream.
    (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/24/2017 9:07:00 AM)


    A very nice poem on the unconditional love. If it really exists or just an imagination. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (1/24/2017 8:41:00 AM)


    Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of pure bliss. However, it's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if it's not carefully nurtured at all times to maintain its bliss. Beautiful poem. A well articulated piece elegantly penned piece in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Terry. (Report) Reply

  • Gladys Brown Prince (1/24/2017 8:39:00 AM)


    A small sweet taste of Heaven
    Until you wake from you dream
    At least it gave us a hint of what heaven will be.
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  • (1/24/2017 6:49:00 AM)


    A small sweet taste from heaven
    Until you wake from your dream
    Superb conceptualization deserving Congrats as also for member poem of the Day.
    (Report) Reply

  • Tatiana Berdennikova (1/24/2017 5:01:00 AM)

    Fairy Tale Love
    This is a beautiful poem. Unconditional love is almost next to impossible, but still probable. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (1/24/2017 4:50:00 AM)

    tom allport
    fairy tales can come true? nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/24/2017 4:43:00 AM)

    Love
    Promises made! Thanks for shring this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (1/24/2017 2:07:00 AM)


    A beautifully constructed poem of love and longing flowed like honey thanks enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (1/24/2017 2:04:00 AM)


    Beautifully composed poem of love and longing enjoyed thanks (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (1/24/2017 1:18:00 AM)


    A very good poem. Well conceived and well written. Congratulations for having it chosen as Member Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (1/24/2017 12:10:00 AM)

    Love
    A truly wonderful poem.++10

    Your poem is one of the the most worthy for this category. Hearty congratulations.

    You must now look at my A Hauntingly Beautiful Word.

    Best
    Robert
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  • (4/2/2008 1:24:00 PM)


    OMG! ! !
    I love this poem it reminds me so much of the way i used to be when i first got with wilson
    its really good though
    i love you
    Bonnie
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011


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