Like a smoke in the sky
Blew away my burning desires
Pushed by bitter truth
I fell from mountain life
The bridge of wishes made
Hope to reach the gate
Just for glimpse of fountain love
To fill the thirsty soul
My plead was put aside
I fell from mountain life
I asked for life to shine
Life laughed with gloomy sign
Fate giggled with smirk smile
I fell from mountain life
I’m stuck in the mid of air
Soul is pulled from the core of hair
Hope changes in form of despair
Hate dipped dagger did love strike
I fell from mountain of life
A tear down slowly slide
On the cheek long since dried
Heart weeps for dying desires
Wailing with silent cry
I fell from mountain life
A letter thus I wrote
Of my love ones who did forgot
My existence and sacrifice
I fell from mountain life
My heart has become weak and old
Of killing words which they spoke
A slave bought for few pennies of lies
I tried but could not die
I want to fall from mountain life
an emotional write...emotions overlapping the words there...ten for this couragious fall
your emotions are so strong your words show your bare heart...a sensitive one! love and its deception and the pain of a pierced heart shown in a moving write! wishing you genuine love and happiness...always...seema!
good job aijaz....the waves of sadness in the piece are very strong and moving.
When we fall from our dreams and realize the bitterness of our lives we become prisoners whose soul yearns to be free.Very good poem makes me think of Eden.
The bridge of wishes made Hope to reach the gate Just for glimpse of fountain love To fill the thirsty soul My plead was put aside I fell from mountain life I don't have write like this, it's amazing, amzing 10
always remember that life is aprecious gift og God. at times it can be painful and trouble some but surely one day the sun will shine and it will fill your life with the colors of hope, Good Luck! ! !
I asked for life to shine Life laughed with gloomy sign Fate giggled with smirk smile I fell from mountain life A tear down slowly slide On the cheek long since dried Heart weeps for dying desires Wailing with silent cry I fell from mountain life Such a Great Great Lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Written with great depth and emotional feeling. The first stanza is particularly effective. Thank you for sharing. Kind regards, Sandra