Wednesday, December 2, 2020

Falls Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.8

meaningless blue sky
if no star twinkles at night
writer's pen falls sleep
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Terence Craddock 12 October 2021

I wrote the poem 'Soul Mind May Wander Free In Dreams' Inspired by the poem 'Falls Sleep' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Terence Craddock 12 October 2021

I wrote the poem 'In Sleep When All Thought Is Stilled' Inspired by the poem 'Falls Sleep' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2020

Yes. An empty canvas. Nice expression.5 stars

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 02 December 2020

very well said keep on doing full score

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Terry Craddock 02 December 2020

even in sleep when all thought is stilled, the soul the mind may wander in dreams, in dreams thought escapes into jumble reality twist impossibilities

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Anjandev Roy 02 December 2020

Fantastic write, as usual......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 December 2020

no pen ever sleeps as long as there is INK U KNOW IT good keep pen active mb

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 December 2020

Wonderful genesis that explains every thing, Thanks for sharing a process of conceptualization.

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Varsha M 02 December 2020

Beautifully pending words. I liked the word writer's pen. And your imagery pen falling asleep. Thank-you

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Varsha M 02 December 2020

Beautifully pending words. I liked the word writer's pen. And your imagery pen falling asleep.

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