Fascinating Temptation Poem by Sandra Feldman

Fascinating Temptation

Rating: 5.0


Desire,
Consuming fire
Relentless choir
Of human want.
One never really,
Puts out the fire
If with desire,
It's Love we want.

Friday, April 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,emotion,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 14 April 2018

Whoa! That was hot! And ruthlessly true. Fascinatingly so! Tempting your reader with your inciting words! Just for that I dump a million stars over your head! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 April 2018

Dear Sandra, such a lovely write👍👍👍

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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2018

If with desire, it is ''. At least first. Am I wrong?

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