I will sing
Song for you
When you're blue
I will see you
Through your blindness
When you're depressed
I will shout out
Through your deafness
When you're speechless
I will smell your fear
Through your darkest hour
When we are fearless
A beautiful poem that touches the core of your heart. To be fearless is a gift of God. To remove the fears from the minds of a fellow human is an act of great generosity! To quote these wonderful lines: I will smell your fear Through your darkest hour When we are fearless Richard, i can see you as a poet with a compassionate heart. God bless you. A full score!
Geeta, thank you so much for your kind words and insightful feedback. Greatly appreciated! !
This is showing how kind of you :) I guess Canadian all are kind hearted, my friend Mj lemon also very kind...this style remind me of Frank Davis sr, philosophical in short write. A brilliant idea, gentle n beautiful piece of work! Inspired indeed.
You are very kind with your appraisal. Thank you so very much for your very positive feedback. You've mentioned two very gifted poets whom I really like and respect. I now look even more forward to reading your poetry.
a well thought out poem of one's true feeling towards someone who needs their help? ............wonderfully written Richard.
Thank you so much, Tom for your insightful and positive feedback. Greatly appreciated!
Reminds me of the song FEAR popularized by BON JOVI.... Perfectly arranged.... I rate it 10+++++
Bernard, I'm not familiar with that song, so I'll check it out. Thank you so much for your very positive feedback. Greatly appreciate your support and encouragement!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a fabulous work......thank u, dear friend, ..