Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 337 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Feeling Hollowed - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Idle within emptiness
Disappointment fills the air
A chilling wind of harshness
Sweeping seasons of despair...

Fingernails bitter purple
A tousle of shredded hair
Weakened limbs and fragile nerves
Dreams strangled to disrepair...

How long 'till the sun comes out?
Forever must still be there
Without the light all things fade
Darkness makes them disappear....

A burning torch within me
Faith, the everlasting flair
Scorching both sense and reason
Too blind to show heaven near...


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Comments about Feeling Hollowed by Romeo Della Valle

  • Heather Wilson (5/28/2012 4:03:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem, faith seems to be the key when disappointment fills the air. may faith live eternally for you. (Report) Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (5/27/2012 10:16:00 PM)


    It comes sometimes.But the auto work of hope, the faith on our life drive us to lead a second renewed life.Cheer Sir! (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2012 12:46:00 PM)


    feed the flame... you live on, my brother! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/26/2012 10:40:00 AM)


    A burning torch within me
    Faith, the everlasting flair
    Scorching both sense and reason
    Too blind to show heaven near...
    I agree. nice poem. regards
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012


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