A Place In You

Rating: 4.8
How can I have a place within you?
I honestly care about your tender ways
Thinking your protection every moment
Loving every details of your life

Understand whatever your past
Forgetting what lies around and behind you
I don’t mind what others ‘r saying
Just give me a little room upon you

Waiting cannot last any longer
Because I will die early longing with you
Shortness of life is everlasting to me
If I had space in the kingdom of your heart

Where will I stay in the rest of my days?
To whom will I give my everlasting commitment?
If your heart is open only for a dot-sized
Will let me pass through a Place within
and open widely to flow like a stream of Love inside you?
Sunday, April 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015
Love! With a place within. Nice work.
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I honestly care about your tender ways Thinking your protection every moment.. nice lnes...10 it is good search to reach and gains tability with blessings from an almighty
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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2015
Written with such passion and beauty it is a great poem on love.
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Ninette Carey 23 May 2015
Beautful spoken! ! A gift of Love to be truly cherished! ! !
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Hazel Durham 19 May 2015
Beautifully written expressing great passion and truth pouring from your besotted heart!
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Nancy Oyula 16 January 2015
Very well written. I love: -)
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Ging Taping 04 September 2014
nice one... treasure every moment.. for we are just a passers by..
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Sonali Ganguly 16 May 2014
beautifully expressed.....
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Amymalia Houston 06 May 2014
Wonderful creation and masterpiece. Burning and passionate love
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Helena Zen 06 May 2014
Two thumbs up on this poem. Great
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