Fever Poem by Practicing Poetess

Fever

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The room is spinning,
Enlarging in size.
The walls breathe in, and out.
I'm weak as a kitten;
My body perspires
It's fever, there's no doubt.
My forehead is burning
And I start to shake
I feel very small, and alone
I sip me some water
Wish for panadol to take
When ill, it's no fun being home.

Saturday, June 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: illness,sickness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Actual date of this poem's writing was 3rd June,2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2018

Touching inscription has been made on illness and fever. Most touching lines are.... I'm weak as a kitten; My body perspires It's fever, there's no doubt. I am so sorry that you were on fever.

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Not to worry, Kumar- - - It's only a poem! I did not really have a fever. But I remembered/recalled what a fever felt like, and I described it and wrote about it. I do that type of thing quite frequently- - write from a memory of something. Thank you for commenting!

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