Falling In Love Poem by Practicing Poetess

Falling In Love

Rating: 4.5


I think I'm falling in love with you.
You were there for me when I had a bad day.
Tired of being locked up inside myself,
You make me want to let myself go,
And not hold back anymore.
You melted me when you brushed my hair,
And I cherish our cuddles and heartfelt talks.
Your eyes brimmed with tears when I shared a past rape,
You can't bear the thought of my being hurt.
Our snuggle sessions are like truth serum.
We see into each others' hearts,
And reveal things no one else ever knew.

Sunday, February 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: couple,love,secrets,sharing,together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 23 February 2018

Such a most beautiful feel when you know that you are falling in love. In most cases, I don´t know at all at the moment of falling in love. Afterward I just noticed how wonderful meeting that had been and the rest follows, you know. yourself. Indeed, absolutely true are your two last concluding lines. Mesmerizing, PP! A 10 and more for the vote. I like very much reading poems about the Love theme.

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Practicing Poetess 23 February 2018

Thanks very much, Sylvia Frances, for your much-appreciated comment! I love having my poetry described as 'mesmerizing'! If you enjoy love-themed poetry, you may like reading my 'Because I Love You' or my 'A Most Unlikely Love.' Same inspiration. Thanks once again!

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Rachel Butler 12 February 2018

youthful in its essences, adolescent in its freedom.

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Practicing Poetess 12 February 2018

Thank you and welcome Rachel Ann, as a brand-new critic of my poetry! How interesting that you are in or from Spain. My new boyfriend (since October 2017) , on whom this poem is based, is Hispanic! Thanks for reading & commenting!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 February 2018

Such a touching poem....10+++++

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Practicing Poetess 12 February 2018

Bernard, thank you so much for the sweet comment and for rating! :)

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Rini Shibu 11 February 2018

Those who stay during bad days are true friends..Good one

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Practicing Poetess 11 February 2018

How true, Rini! Thank you for your observant comment!

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