Words show more obsession
they refuse to leave
Waves come one after the other
thud along the shore
leave debris to come back
suck what they brought before
Wet or not
the sandy shores remain
unmindful unmoved
I should learn lessons one or two-
apart from sucking
the last lucky drops
speak less and drink more
be a shore and a sea
on every word, every wave
less words more action behaves
I should learn lessons.......this line is the core of this meaningful poem. Well penned dear poet. Top score!
A great metaphorical write. Very insightful with wonderful lessons of life.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A thoughtful action always needs the manure of silence..the sea metaphor is aptly used...kudos Kesav