Finally Comes The White Peacock Poem by Denis Mair

Finally Comes The White Peacock

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Nature used trace metals and rare earths
Held their toxins safe in keratin outgrowths
Lined up as pigments on a refractive surface
Collided light waves to give a shimmer
Varied their hues to depict an eyespot
Key to fit the template in a peahen's eye
But this is a key to turn the lock further
To lock them into more birth-death cycles
Into entwinements down through generations
Beauty grows as ever from workings of will
And will in the end surrenders to beauty
Now along comes this pure-white one
Ghost of will still willing
Says...Look to the core beyond adornment
See how it adorns me all the more!
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Here is a Chinese version of my poem, translated by Mr. Wang Hao:

"终于,白孔雀来了"

大自然使用了稀有金属和稀土
将其毒素纳入角质蛋白,生长到体外
让它们作为颜料排列在一个折射光线的表面上
并让光束折射成幽深的闪烁,让斑斓的色彩绘成
一只翎眼
这是一把开启母孔雀眼孔的钥匙,但这钥匙的作用
是把锁芯拧得更紧
把它们牢牢锁进一重又一重的生死轮
会让它们纠缠着,一代一代地传下去
美丽一如既往地从意志的作用中生发出来
但意志力最终要降伏于美丽
这时一路走来这纯白的一只意志的幽灵
仍然愿意诉说- - 那装饰之下的内核
你看它,即便此刻,还在装饰我

王浩译

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was inspired by PEACOCK AWAITS HIS PEAHEN on the PoemHunter page of Smt Hemangi Tapan Pradhan.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 19 July 2023

......surrenders to beauty...... significant....

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Susan Williams 15 May 2016

Debis, you just made scientific exposition poetic! ! ! ! You must wield a supremely magic wand to be able to do that. I never once read a science textbook that spurred me into creating a poem... I think though that I would like to give it a go because this is so creative, compelling, and- - I don't believe I'm about to say this but - - - sensual. Next thing I'll be saying is that algebra is romantic. Absolutely top-notch writing as usual, my friend... My favorite lines? Oh, goodness, yes, I love the closing lines but what grabs my art-loving brain cells is: Lined up as pigments in a refractive matrix Collided light waves from exact angles Interference patterns to give a shimmer Varied their hues to depict an eyespot

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