Fire & Love Poem by Patricia Gale

Fire & Love

Rating: 5.0


Golden orangish flames
Hinted with a hue of blue
Circling round hardened wood
Consuming the outer
Streaking through the grain
Down to its very core

Strange.. the comparison to love
How it begins with a spark
Then a glowing consuming feeling
Circling round the outer till it reaches the very core of the soul
As it streaks through the body then reaching the heart

Fire and love different as night is to day
But none the less….
Both consume and may warm a being
Or leave one with nothing but ashes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A very deep poem with excellent imagery. You use colors to give brighter pictures to the reader and it certainly worked for me. Excellent! Karin Anderson

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 October 2007

Very deep Patricia and yes, both give burning sensation?

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Meggie Gultiano 13 October 2007

lovely piece Pat..but this is very deep..thanks for this hugs, Meggie

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 October 2007

But what a lovely way to burn...10

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Theodora Onken 13 October 2007

This is very deep and profound! Awesome and thought provoking, Patricia. Theo

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