Patricia Gale

For Awhile You Were Mine..... - Poem by Patricia Gale

We danced on the billowing white clouds
Our feet as light as feathers down

Heaven was found in my heart that night
As twinkling star light mesmerized our souls

We floated with the angels
And painted the midnight sky

Eyes closed
With hearts wide opened

The music played or’ and or’
As we were lost in each other eyes

We drifted like sails open the open sea
Gentle breezes softly caressing our beings

So close we held each other
Our hearts beating to the sound of our names

Perfect syllables formed from your lips
As you whispered, I love you my darling

Yes you were mine for a little while
Forever held with in my dreams

Comments about For Awhile You Were Mine..... by Patricia Gale

  • (8/22/2007 6:04:00 AM)

    Gorgeous penning Patricia and fantastic news about your book deal! I am so proud of you, with poems this good it's no surprise to me at all.... Well Done You. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (4/27/2007 11:17:00 PM)

    Absolutely excellent imagry, telling a most beautiful love story of an angelic dream. I truly enjoyed the read Patricia--Thankyou--Melvina-- (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2007 1:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful and romantic.I especially loved 'dancing on billowing white clouds ' and floating with the angels.' Sometimes the most perfect and purest love can be found in our dreams and there it is safe and forever ours to (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2007 10:30:00 AM)

    I was touched by this great work of yours not only because it's marvellous itself,
    but because it reminded me of my super favorite song 'You were mine' performed by THE DIXIE CHICKS.....'when for so long, you were mine', as it goes.
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  • (3/31/2007 9:41:00 AM)

    This is so moving Patricia, capturing a heart, and holding on to a dream
    Love duncan X
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  • Charles M Moore (3/31/2007 9:23:00 AM)

    Elegant and romaticly thoughtful as ever, Patricia, Pleasure to read. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2007 8:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2007 8:55:00 AM)

    'Eyes closed, with hearts wide opened' - a lovely phrase. And a lovely poem, Patricia. Soft and luxuriously dreamy........

    Love, Fran xxx
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  • Chris Lane (3/31/2007 8:35:00 AM)

    How wonderful to share this(that) with someone. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 9, 2011

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