Fire The Holy Element Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Fire The Holy Element

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the
fire
burn goodly
make suitable
purify the dish
revive the tired body
make healthy and wealthy life
removes darkness of walking path
shows insightful path the worshipper
power from heaven by Prometheus
those who knows its realism hail pretty
gets all through smiling as full useful
those who already purified
contemplates on its anger
finds out its wrathful life
quenches its body
brings breezy soul
to live near
fairly
dear



-January 04,2019 Chattogram

Friday, January 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 July 2019

The structure of the poem is like that of Mount Olympus from where Prometheus had stolen fire. Nice poem. enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2019

Purify the dish! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2019

removes darkness of walking path shows insightful path the worshipper power from heaven by Prometheus....breezy soul and body. the story of prometheus in literature stands out..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 January 2019

A beautiful poem with a very nice structure! Loved reading it.

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