Amanda Lukas

Rookie (Ft. Lauderdale, FL)

First Love - Poem by Amanda Lukas

It was as comfortable as a worn set of flannel sheets.
He was my shelter,
a tin roof without a leak.
I was so content and cool
waking up in his strong arms.
And I admit not being able to resist
my tender lover's charms.
I'd gaze at him
in loving awe.
I couldn't help but
look right past
each freckle,
every flaw.


Comments about First Love by Amanda Lukas

  • (9/12/2006 7:37:00 AM)


    Great poem...I remember my first love........Ah memories.

    Anyway great poem Amanda,

    Take care,

    Jay x
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  • Sydne Morris (1/25/2006 12:20:00 PM)


    Very good! ! Ya! !
    I remember my 'first love'
    I can so relate
    Sydne
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  • (12/9/2005 4:16:00 PM)


    What a charming and thought provoking poem, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2005 6:30:00 AM)


    it is true.. in your first love you can not sense his flaws, you think he is perfect!
    great work!
    HBH
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  • (11/2/2005 1:43:00 PM)


    Good use of rhyme to lead the poem on. Lovely images. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 2, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 19, 2006


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