Fish Dialogues Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

a timely warning written in catchy phrases.beautufull.posted 10 surya

A good description on our polluted seas and the poor marine life. A job well done! !

Dear Siddiqui, I liked your choice of subjects, It is true no of fishes and other creatures under water are regularly dieing out of pollution created by us, It's a timely call to control pollution to the mankind. But in the third paragraph I feel ' innocence'should be 'innocent ' and 'pollution ' should be 'polluted' This perhaps will give a better end-rhyme as well.This is a mere suggestion from my side, Thanks for asking comments-Rajkumar

A nice message to the society! Congrats!

observant with much needed detailed descriptions embedded.. share with the world!

Rub a fish... Make a wish. Throw it back in... Almost pulled, inside. Wrist wrestled from the deep. Wish came true, this one I keep. Great poem. What do ya think o' this one? MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

You dedicate poems to every1 on poemhunter? why? good write

i enjoied reading this lovely poem...good work my friend

man is destroying the earth...and he wont fix it....never

very subtle environmental concerns expressed here...