Five Haiku Poem by Daniel Brick

Five Haiku

Rating: 5.0


This is hard to do:
seventeen syllables only.
One hundred clamor!

I wrote a sonnet.
Haiku master poured more tea.
Which the true poet?

When good fortune reigns,
we should dance and shout, 'Hurray! '
A child leads us.

Today is Sunday:
forecast says, rain all day long.
Should we rename it?

The cloud did not care:
it rained on my special day.
Then left - business elsewhere!

Sunday, August 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was fun to do. I wasn't planning to do it: I did one and another popped up, and another....Is that how haiku behave? Like sweet koala bears?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 13 February 2016

This is hard to do/ seventeen syllables only... But you can do beautifully.

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Pamela Sinicrope 04 October 2015

I wish you would write one about sweet koala bears! I haven't seen haiku put together into a longer poem... Is there a word for that? ;) . I enjoyed reading these. They made me smile.... Especially the one about tea....

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Amitava Sur 11 September 2015

Wish they continue to flow more and more like pop corns on the pan and let us enjoy their beauty. Thank you Daniel.

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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Love the innate flow from one to another, very creative and enticing! Thank you for sharing, I thoroughly enjoyed them! RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 09 August 2015

Daniel, these are amazing! I hope more keep popping up

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