The world was availed to me
I put my heart and soul in it
Thinking it is mine
It took my heart and soul
And disappeared.
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There is freedom in being alone
Loneliness is a curse upon that freedom
Like death few will relish it
To have a partner
Give a bit of your self.
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Life is like silent waters
High or low tides of time
Create waves in ocean
A wise sailor enjoys equally
Thrill or tranquility.
A very very good poetical perception.You are a talented poet, a real, true one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It took my heart and soul And disappeared. : (: ( but i laughed! seems like we have here some fine observations on life. i especially liked: There is freedom in being alone Loneliness is a curse upon freedom Like death few will relish it To have a partner Give a bit of your self. one should be careful to distinguish between 'being alone' and 'loneliness'. you seem to have found the differences. ok, i NOW know how to 'have a partner'. HOW does one have a GOOD partner? hmmm? to MyPoemList. and showcase is calling it. let me know if you are interested. please. but is 'li' lowercase Roman Numerals for 51? ? i never heard of lowercase R. numerals. bri :)
Thanks Bri for your comment. It is really Flash Thought II. I have tried to fix it I hope it will show up like that. Glad that it made to your poem list.