Flight Poem by Bharati Nayak
Flight
Flight
Wow- - See!
How sublime
Is the view
When a mother bird
Feeds her chicks!
A very ordinary
Yet so tender
Is the sight!
How sweetly sound
Their happiness filled twitters
And joy is overflowing
Their little nest!
One day
The small chick will grow
He will fly away,
Leaving the warmth
Of his mother's lap.
It is nature's rule
So common and so ordinary.
Mother bird works tirelessly
To feed her chicks
And try to teach them
The art of flying.
Now, when
The time comes
For the baby bird
To spread his wing
Getting ready to jump
In to the free sky
Why
Sadness flickers
In mother bird's eyes?
Be happy
O' Mother bird
Let your chick be free
Let him spread his wing
And map his own sky!
A natural phenomena common with all living beings has so touchingly been put to a p...oem. Though all creatures have a sentimental attitude towards such separation we human beings brood over the sorrow caused by it.......10
This is really a great sight to see mother bird feeding her chicks till they get wings and fly away to explore the sky and all things beautiful. Once the mother bird was a chick too and must have felt to see the world. Your imagination goes beyond the sky while composing this sweet and meaningful poem. Loved it. like to read it again and again.
YOU may like to avoid cliches in poetry else it loses charm of real creativity MOTHER BIRD POET IS LOVELY PL DO excuse me
A beautiful nature poem! So well penned......appreciated and admired.......10++
Loved this magnificent poem dear poetess. Beautifully composed. Stay always happy and blessed!
it's an excellent poem my dear poetess Bharati. Extremely well penned. Top score!
A very beautiful truth, painful too! The baby bird will one day leave its nest and its parents, when wings sprout and it masters the art of flying. It is the rule of Nature! The nest that has been resonant with its twittering will be silent. The mother bird feels it, but should be happy that the birdie is now free to conquer the uncharted skies....! A lovely simple poem! A sure 10
How sweetly sound Their happiness filled twitters And joy is overflowing Their little nest! ......loved these lines. Beautifully penned.
When the birds learn to stand on their feet firmly and flap their wings with confidence, they take off to explore the skies. Mothers protect them till they are strong enough to fly. That is the way of the world. A beautiful poem dear Poetess Bharati........10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 3:19:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Flying bird and the imagery in your poem are superb imaginative pleasure to read Mother bird is the true pioneer of the child bird one day will come without mother bird the child bird will fly more and more high, too far independently......