Flower Poem by Mahima Prathaban

Flower

Rating: 4.8


Am petite and fragrant and adorn your way

You smile at me when all is merry and gay

But nip off my life to make your bouquet

And brush me away at the end of the day.



I smile through the day from dawn to dusk..

For the bee and for humans thou you are brusque..

Short is my life - I live for a day..

Pluck me not human - with breeze let me sway..

Flower
Saturday, May 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 27 May 2017

I smile through the day! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2017

You smile at me..... congrats on being chosen... a big 10++++++

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B.m. Biswas 07 June 2017

Congratulations.... Flowers have the power to keep one gay in any condition

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Tribhawan Kaul 07 June 2017

Lovely poem. Yes, flowers are not to be plucked.

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Tom Allport 07 June 2017

a poem of beautiful things that shine for a short stay with us and yes I agree flowers should be left to Natures own way? ............well written

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

fragrant and adorn your way nip off my life to make your bouquet smile through the day from dawn to dusk.. These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations Brilliant., your imagination is wonderful. A wonderful mind you possess. Tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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Bharati Nayak 07 June 2017

I smile through the day from dawn to dusk.. For the bee and for humans thou you are brusque.. Short is my life - I live for a day.. Pluck me not human - with breeze let me sway.. - - - - - - - -An amazing write about the beauty and sacrifice.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2017

A very sweet poem about a flower. Though its life is short it spreads peace and happiness in onlookers. Life may be short but one must make it great by giving smile to others. Nice poem. Loved it.

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Dear poet, Congrats on getting selected as poet of the day

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 June 2017

Hi Mahima, Congrats on getting selected as poet of the day. This beautiful little poem deserves the accolades without doubt..

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