Font Color=red* Teeny Weeny Troubles Poem by Your Soul

Font Color=red* Teeny Weeny Troubles

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There are many gurls over here
some have cheers some have tears
They log in during school hours
And write about their haters and lovers
They are here mostly on weekdays
And on weekends they take holidays
They sit in their computer lab
and trick the teachers who keep tab

Their names are like, sad truth, broken heart
heart broken, depressed gurl, no one understand me,
alone gurl, lonely gurl, let cuts wrist like coupons,
inwardly crying, i want to be happy, devil gal,
misunderstood gurl, hated gurl, emo gurl, emo dark gurl,
confused gurl, lost gurl, devil gurl, darkness everywhere, pain behind green, blue or brown eyes,
depressed chick, living in hell, emotional butterfly, bloody tears
etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc

They are happy one day because they fall in love
they are sad second day because they have break up
Third day they are again happy because they are again in love
Fourth day they are again sad because they have break up

They write their story in small paragraph
and post in ph as a poetry
The typical sign is instead of 'you are' they write 'your'
Their english is not pure
Thus they are not sure
They often cut their wrists
and their eyes oft have mist
They use safety pin to do that act
Then here they express that fact

Their are so many problems
And ph has again increase their problems
one has to log ten times
without any crimes
So they can't ventilate their feelings
so their hearts can't have healings

Your Soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 31 March 2010

it is just one small measure by your determination to read from they, a word...iip

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Iron Panda 23™ 31 March 2010

woahss! ! soo deep o.o awesome! ! just awesome! ! \^-^/

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Ramesh Rai 02 February 2012

super, superman. keep it up

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 December 2011

i think its better if you write stories too you see, this poem made me laugh i am enlightened with how young people emote their heart out esp when you said, you have to log ten times first before you get in this site

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Jodie Cooper 01 December 2011

hmmm i like the poem but are you takin the mik sayin let cuts wrist like coupons, or bein serious

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Leas Celyn 07 February 2011

i know what you mean by this poem. i have people like that where i live at. every girl goes through phases but some actually like to be in one just so they can show others how bad off they are. this poem holds a lot of truth...

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Zaynab Elzain 06 July 2010

gd poem..i like it, i feel like it's talking about me, gd for u

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