Fool For You Poem by Lyn Paul

Fool For You

Rating: 4.9


God Said
You are a fool
You can't
Save the world
Change the world
Heal the world

You Must
Care
For You
Your own world

Time is passing
The air is changing
The world
Won't stop
For You

Fool you are
For not seeing
Though
Brave you are
Knowing

A place is set
For you
When - You don't know
Soon - You hope not
Peacefully
You hope

You know you've been
A Giant Fool
A Fool for those
You've guided


You also know
What it has given you
To be a Fool


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13th July 2019

Lyn Paul

Fool For You
Friday, July 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,hope,prayer,giving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 13 July 2019

An imaginative and we'll written poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2019

You Must Care For You Your own world.......touching expression! A pragmatic write......................10

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Tony Karas 15 July 2019

You are no fool. Well done. Hugs.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 October 2019

'Soon - You hope not Peacefully You hope' - yes, exactly so! Thanks for sharing this nice poem. If could explain a bit, as to how this picture is related to your poem!

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2019

i don't recall God saying any of that. Hmm? i'll have to ask Her about it next time we 'lunch' together. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

Time is passing The air is changing The world Won't stop For You.....outstanding conceptualization. Time will not wait us and so we have to do accordingly unless we will be fool. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2019

All know aussies r good poets and you add to their wealth do read my poem MOM'S SMILES you will love it BUT PROMISE NOT TO CRY as many do ma'am I have many aussie poets as friends

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 July 2019

Foolish People cannot Save the World! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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