God Said
You are a fool
You can't
Save the world
Change the world
Heal the world
You Must
Care
For You
Your own world
Time is passing
The air is changing
The world
Won't stop
For You
Fool you are
For not seeing
Though
Brave you are
Knowing
A place is set
For you
When - You don't know
Soon - You hope not
Peacefully
You hope
You know you've been
A Giant Fool
A Fool for those
You've guided
You also know
What it has given you
To be a Fool
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13th July 2019
Lyn Paul
You Must Care For You Your own world.......touching expression! A pragmatic write......................10
'Soon - You hope not Peacefully You hope' - yes, exactly so! Thanks for sharing this nice poem. If could explain a bit, as to how this picture is related to your poem!
i don't recall God saying any of that. Hmm? i'll have to ask Her about it next time we 'lunch' together. bri :)
Time is passing The air is changing The world Won't stop For You.....outstanding conceptualization. Time will not wait us and so we have to do accordingly unless we will be fool. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated.10
All know aussies r good poets and you add to their wealth do read my poem MOM'S SMILES you will love it BUT PROMISE NOT TO CRY as many do ma'am I have many aussie poets as friends
Foolish People cannot Save the World! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An imaginative and we'll written poem.