For An Interim Poem by Valsa George

For An Interim

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How I wish to be an eagle
Perched on a promontory
Gazing idly at the world from a distance
To get lost in the vastness around me

In the stillness of this place
Let me toss away all my cares
And watch the curls of smoke
Rising from my snuffed out dreams

Action is now perdition for me,
Human company, lacerating pain!

Let me whisk away,
From the world of din,
A few moments of privacy
And stay awhile in loneliness,
It being my sole companion now
Not for long,
Not till sleep claims me
To redeem me of all my blues!
No… never…
But just for a while,

(Now and then, all of us
Need some space away from the crowd

I am never an escapist
To stealthily run away from life
But I badly need a little quiet now
To straighten my mangled nerves!

Thursday, March 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 13 March 2014

Some solitude found in the daily grind of life is beneficial to our heart and soul. Even though we have to live amongst others because we are creatures of habit we must find time for ourselves to sort out our feelings. Very good as always.

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Valerie Dohren 12 March 2014

Solitude can be welcome in a hectic life, but not too much of it. Humans are gregarious and need companionship - not enough, and we get depressed.

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Joseph Anderson 12 March 2014

Solitude can provide solace for the soul. In this busy world tis hard to come by. Worthy thinking and well composed. This should make us pause and realize

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Amitava Sur 12 March 2014

Human mind is so busy in thinking awaken or asleep, that sometimes it needs to remain within. Very truly Need some space away from the crowd ........ so nice

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Amitava Sur 12 March 2014

Human mind is so busy in thinking awaken or asleep, that sometimes it needs to remain within. Very truly Need some space away from the crowd ........ so nice

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2019

Let me whisk away, From the world of din, A few moments of privacy And stay awhile in loneliness, .....the likeness of silence by you has been nicely portrayed. The power of silence should be felt by persons. One can know the power of silence only when he will keep himself away from the world of din. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared.

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 July 2017

Quiet and solitude to quiet the mind is a soothing balm to life's troubles. One needs to have time to rejuvenate or heal. This poem takes you to the heights of space and quiet.

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Md Asadullah 20 March 2014

Yes, At times we do feel like staying away from crowd. We do feel like spending some time in solitude, This is actually good thing one can rejuvenate himself/herself and can again come back to face the harsh realities of life.

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Yash Shinde 19 March 2014

....we all need a break from hectic life, but i salute your imagination of portraying solitude through example of an eagle....lovely write

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Dinesan Madathil 14 March 2014

The poem proclaims a stage of humanising a poet not succumbing to reverses, dear madam and as such its message flies unto every habitat though this eagle just sits and sees. An interim to glorify into a protagonist`s haven in waiting!

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