For My Rose! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

For My Rose!

Rating: 4.8


So many charming flowers loved me:
Some of them were Daisy, Lily, Jasmine and Rose
But I loved the one among them was Rose
''Rose- The Queen of flowers'',
As I was The Orchid-The King of flowers! .
In our garden of love we gazed at each other
She loved the elegance of my 'hair',
And her 'style' of petals and fragrance I loved.
Those staminiferous pollens of fervour,
Stimulated love in our hearts-
That bloom'd dreams of florescence days.
But in the spring she departed from me
By the mighty hands of a brutal gardner;
He kissed at her ruddy cheeks so sweetly,
Ornated a gold ring in her slender finger,
And decked her neck with garland,
In my pain he decorated his bouqet of life.
'Twas then my heart winced in the hands of wind,
'Twas that day I lost the elegance of my soul
'Twas that time I became a lunatic in lonliness,
This friable floral life may fall down soon
Though my Rose must be beautiful for ever
Because once''The King of flowers loved her..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 February 2012

Hello Master-blaster of romantic poetry. Yet again your touched my heart with this Lucid poem. It is soothing experience to read your poem.10++++ and many flowers only for my dearest PAL! A noble work!

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Alicia Meyers 15 December 2011

I love this poem! It's beautiful!

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Shahana mahazin 27 November 2011

ending of the poem put a smile on my face...it waz so cute..but y some lines so long enough to gutter on the rhythm of poem.... for to decorate the bouquet of life.. ....cool..

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2011

'My heart then winced in the hands of wind and I lost my elegance of soul for she left me' RAB

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B. M. Atsen 26 October 2011

It's... Wow! I love the comitment to true love in it. But watch your words and vocabulary, they got me confused somehow. Bravo!

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Craig Moses Uche 24 May 2023

This is art in one of it's purest form

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

You have loved so many flowers and rose is special. This has special attraction and fragrance. Definitely your rose will be beautiful and lovable ever. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Craig Moses Uche 06 December 2017

By the mighty hands of a brutal gardener! The king of flowers loved her wow! awesome stuff

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Rachel Butler 23 September 2015

Always a joyous read from you Vipins a tale well told

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A lovely romantic poem written in poetic diction. I like the articulation of the piece as it captured the essence of the poem and the poet's convictions. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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