Dee Daffodil


For The Moment - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Instead of waiting for our future,
To unfold before my very eyes,
I'll be content to be with you...
For the moment.

And who knows...
Maybe the moments,
Will turn into,
A lifetime.


A poem by Dee Daffodil (H.W 1982)


Comments about For The Moment by Dee Daffodil

  • (8/15/2008 11:37:00 PM)


    I used that line one time.
    The girl said, 'Yea, that's what I'm afraid of.'

    GW62
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  • (3/22/2007 6:06:00 AM)


    lovely, elegant and strong. (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2007 10:15:00 PM)


    Howard Johnson is right! ! Sorry, Mel Brooks fan... I loved this one, awesome...
    Lee
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  • (3/12/2007 4:03:00 PM)


    so simply stated, yet absolutely enlightening..Very well written.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/18/2006 10:37:00 AM)


    A write doesn't need to be long to be great, lol Dee (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2006 10:11:00 AM)


    Hi Dee, I think your right. I think we should take everyday as new day. I keep looking back into the past. It is hard to move on if you do this. I think when you go through things it makes you reflect on everything, I think. I guess it is normal for a while. (Report) Reply

  • (7/25/2006 10:45:00 AM)


    lovely :) simple but elegant, not a word wasted! (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (6/4/2006 6:08:00 PM)


    Dee, a realistic thought, ... it's impossible to know what the future will hold, so we have to live for the moment and hope that the moment will last forever. Good write! !
    Brian
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  • Simona Terron (5/30/2006 1:54:00 AM)


    How nicely said, so much in so few words...a universe of meaning put across so simply, minus all the fluff and so so honest...
    Nice work Dee!
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/18/2006 4:40:00 PM)


    DEE... MUCH DELIVERED IN A FEW PROFOUND WORDS...YOUR MANTRA
    IS COMMENDABLE...ANOTHER CHUTE, IF YOU WILL, OFF THE BRANCH OF THE '' CARPE DEIM '' THEORY...NICE WRITE...& A (10) FOR THE MOMENT!

    '''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R. ~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/6/2006 9:02:00 AM)


    Maybe indeed! ... All we have is the moment.

    dan
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  • (5/5/2006 1:19:00 PM)


    When I came looking for your poetry I never expected to find quiet so much tallent and
    beautiful messages contained, BRILLIANT!
    Love Duncan
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  • (5/5/2006 9:43:00 AM)


    Oh, I loved this! Treasure, pure treasure!
    Love Aisha
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  • (5/3/2006 11:18:00 AM)


    A quick one and a simple but important truth. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2006 1:25:00 PM)


    This I really like! Good write, Daffy Dill. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 2, 2006



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