Forever Poem by David Wood

Forever

Rating: 5.0


Forever is but a concept
That exists in our own minds
Like railway tracks going off
To infinity, to a finite dot.

But what is forever in our mind?
Is it months in the future, a
Series of never ending dates
That melt into further months?

Forever is a time span that we
Cannot imagine; like eternity,
Never ending. Something
Beyond our comprehension.

For some forever is all the time
They have left in the moment
Of life’s complexity where even
Tomorrow lasts forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 August 2013

Forever is all the time left in the moment. Great interpretation reflecting reality. Poem of great beauty and flow.

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Dave Walker 13 August 2013

Forever, is a long time in my mind. A great poem and a good question.

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Heather Wilkins 13 August 2013

forever is forever and ever never ending. everlasting. well written a good read

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Ramesh Rai 13 August 2013

Forever is a time span that we Cannot imagine; like eternity, Never ending. Something Beyond our comprehension. beautiful lines. eternity can not b imagined.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Beautiful poem... Forever is long lasting.. no end for it....Loved reading it..

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A good detailing about the confusion of for ever in our mind.... well thought

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Mohabeer Beeharry 04 September 2013

We imagine a lot of things in this life when we cannot figure it out. Forever is one of them. I enjoy this open. And well written. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Queeny Gona 24 August 2013

Great way of opening the concept of Forever and with an alluring conclusion of the same. Wonderful read. Voted 10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 August 2013

Forever and the ever before, ever before if not to us but forever is not it may be eternity or till the time we breathe..it depends upon the magnification power of the mind its womb and tomb both is mind that's why poet says Forever is but a concept, That exists in our own minds again on concluding Tomorrow lasts forever. in this if one dies today than tomorrow last fore ever..........thank u Mr. David love your work and love to read fantastic work

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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2013

Forever is our breaths.. because when we died it gone and it be forever while the body alive, when we die we forget about what is forever...because we arent forever_Soul

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