M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,730 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Forever And Ever Till Eternity... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Like a phoenix I rise from the ashes of my dreams,
My mind, rejuvenates for what I have seen.

A beautiful world without sorrows and pains,
Hate filling everything with solace and restrain.

My healing tears silently fall by taking away the pain and hurt,
a calmness seeps inside me like the first summer’s rainy dirt.

I am cleansed and refreshed as I am born again,
The memories of the lost love flushes out from my brain.

Like a soulful melody I forgive myself and you,
for the mistakes we committed disappears like dew.

From the unseen chains that strangled us in the past,
It is a new beginning for you and me and for our new lit love to last.

Forever and ever till eternity.....

Topic(s) of this poem: courage, determination, faith

Form: Couplet


Comments about Forever And Ever Till Eternity... by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sara Militello (7/12/2017 11:43:00 AM)


    Only a beautiful soul could have written such a poem as this. I thank the universe for one such as you because you prove that it's possible. (Report) Reply

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  • Uzefa Rashida M.a (2/12/2016 9:43:00 AM)


    great minds have great ways to understand the lessons life teaches.(Emphasis Mine) (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2015 7:02:00 AM)


    Interesting poem, enjoyable man. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2015 3:46:00 PM)


    rhyme like song...with a beat to go along...would be great (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/22/2015 11:55:00 PM)


    When mind is purged of all sense of guilt and sorrow, we feel quite light! In such a condition, one will be able to forgive all those who have hurt him! With this when healing is complete, one emerges new as a phoenix, seeing beauty and grace all around! A lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • (9/22/2015 2:04:00 PM)


    Superb poem...Like Phoenix your imaginations grow.10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/22/2015 8:28:00 AM)


    A very well wrote poem, wonderful......................... (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/22/2015 3:16:00 AM)


    Not only love but I wish your poem to last forever and ever till eternity. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 22, 2015


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