For You Poem by M. Asim Nehal

For You

Rating: 5.0


My thoughts dances with delight
as I frantically typed Your name on my heart.

With every breath of cacophony
My mind goes on for starch

You vivified my heart to explore
The truth hidden in your vastness

I conquered my mind to fit Your image
Nicely laced in platinum frame, a futile try.

With great passion now I declare
You are my Master and I am Your servant.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Submission to the power. Nicely written, Mohammed

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Seema Chowdhury 13 October 2015

This is very nice and meaningful.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 October 2015

A passionate spiritual poem with great diction and flow.

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Abduhoo Salamath 15 August 2016

With great passion now I declare You are my Master and I am Your servant. wooow... what a think... great..

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 12 February 2016

The poet has his own way of showing his devotion to the Almighty

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2015

Wonderful poem Man...Class.

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Liza Sudina 08 November 2015

You are my Master and I am Your servant. - great tribute to God!

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T Rajan Evol 14 October 2015

And this YOU is God, Lover and Master all for one, Amazing write, Anybody can use this poem as per their need.

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