Forever Lost Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Forever Lost

Rating: 5.0


I was only lost
When I ran away
From my true self
And buried self
In this nightmare

Monday, September 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2017

The cost! ! In this nightmare. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 September 2017

Edward, sometimes we pay a huge cost for the nightmare!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 September 2017

Lovely poem and so true. You were only LOST when you ran away From your true self And buried yourself in this nightmare. What a pity, PLEASE dig it up and be ready for your sweetest Dreams, not the nightmare. Loveliest worded and so minimal, but touched me most maximal. My grand compliments for this brevity. A TEN for this beautiful jewel, a gem! 10

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Richard Wlodarski 29 September 2017

Sylvia, thank you so very much for your very positive insightful feedback. And for thinking that the poem is a gem! Greatly appreciated!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 September 2017

Lovely poem and so true. You were only LOST when you ran away From your true self And buried yourself in this nightmare. What a pity, PLEASE dig it up and be ready for your sweetest Dreams, not the nightmare. Loveliest worded and so minimal, but touched me most maximal. My grand compliments for this brevity. A TEN for this beautiful jewel, a gem! TEN.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 September 2017

A nice thought! Nice to share.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 September 2017

Thank you, Akham. Always a pleasure to share!

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