Forever No More Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Forever No More

Rating: 5.0


I loved you so much more
Than you'll ever know
Didn't give you time you deserved
Truly didn't know how or why

My heart was in right place
But my mind was displaced
Eyes blinded by sparkling smile
Ears deafened by crying pain

Your heart cried out to me
I wasn't there for you
You only asked for little time
I never seemed to be around

You're not around anymore
And now I've found some more time
To reflect on time spent together
And think 'bout when we will meet again

Thursday, June 16, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 June 2022

This sad poem of regret, also carries valuable lessons.5 stars.

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A sure 10, dear Richard and to my favourite

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

Always an honour to have some of my poetry added to your favourites. Sincerest thanks, Geeta!

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Thank you Richard for this poem that really sets you to think of the right and the wrong.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

You're most welcome, Geeta. Always therapeutic for me to write such poetry. And I hope it's of some benefit to the readers.

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A poem of regret. This happens to many of us. We realise very late the important things that we missed in life. However late, the fact that realisation dawned is of significance and redeeming. There are many who never realise their mistakes. That is the worst.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

Much thought went into your sincerely worded response of such wisdom. I am very grateful to you for having taken the time to do that.

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M. Asim Nehal 17 June 2022

Good times and bad times are part and parcels of this life's journey. To enjoy good times even more we need to encounter tough times/sad days. Nicely written poem. Full *****

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

Sincerest thx, Dr. Nehal for your wonderfully worded response. And for the full marks.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 June 2022

Sincerest thanks, Poet Menon for adding it to your favourites.

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