Forgotten Story Poem by Rini Shibu

Forgotten Story

Rating: 5.0


Never you know how much pain you gave
If you were careful that little heart would have been saved
Heart which slips without our consent
Have shattered into pieces at present
The wound which you gave will never heal
It will be taken to her grave, no one can peel
The day when you will realize, you might feel sorry
But by then it will be a forgotten story
It's not too late to turn around
Let the healing touch of love surround

Friday, June 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2018

Such a heartwarming poem, Rini👍👍👍

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Sandra Feldman 29 June 2018

People hurt and carry on, Selfishly, they hurt Than just go on, I have never understood How there can be pleasure In being mean, not doing good. Beautifully written, with a lot of good sentiments. Very nice to read. So little feeling in this World, today.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

Pain given in the past is not so easy to forget. Let the healing touch of love surrounds and let the pain disappear. An amazing poem is very brilliantly presented here...10

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2018

Sometimes we tell a story that is still sleeping in our hearts but we try to deceive ourselves that it's a forgotten story.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2018

The wound which you gave will never heal It will be taken to her grave, no one can peel.............the healing touch of love is that we need now. thank u dear poetess Rini for this sublime theme......... tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 June 2018

The love the hurt the betrayal must all be forgotten why carry to another world a burden rotten they will also say u should have left it RJ UR THE POETESS TODAY IF I COULD SAY OF TODAY

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Lamar Cole 29 June 2018

This is a very heartfelt poem about forgotten story.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2018

Rini, you have got innate skills with you! I am a fan of your poems! You can make a mark! I would love to see you grow as an accomplished poetess! We are beginners, we will learn many things! This forum is a very good platform for us! Time will heal everything! Take everything sportively! I appreciated the undertone! (10)

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