Four Chambers Poem by Rini Shibu

Four Chambers

Rating: 5.0


Love is filled in four Chambers of my heart
You are with me, life is not at all hard
Your love is my guard
You never make me sad
Love is flowing to all my body parts
It's joyful from the start
When I am hurt its the balm
You make me always calm
There is no more space left in my heart
Your love is fully packed, and can't depart
You are very smart
You owned my heart
Fired on it your love dart
No force can now set us apart

Wednesday, December 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 27 December 2017

Rini, such a lovely poem...10+++

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Robert Murray Smith 26 May 2018

Such a beautifully crafted romantic poem. ++10

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Savita Tyagi 03 January 2018

Lovely poem from a heart filled with love. Such love directed to others will only do good and will spread cheers around. Stay blessed.

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Rini Shibu 03 January 2018

Thanks savitaji for your kind words..

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Akhtar Jawad 28 December 2017

The four chambers of a heat, two auricles and two ventricles, all filled in with love, so love was inherited in the blood and it was so strong that whether it's oxygenated or not, doesn't matter. One having such a heart breaths-in love and breaths-out love. Great and thoughtful.

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks Akhtar for posting your remarks

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Lamar Cole 27 December 2017

This is a very romantic poem.

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks for your lovely note

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 December 2017

Yes, your cardiac cycle is complete! ....well written Rini....Your love is my guard/..You never make me sad........10

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks Dillip, glad to see your comment

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