Forgotten Unforgotten Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Forgotten Unforgotten

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We don't remember those extra ordinary men
In fact we have forgotten those unforgotten
They lead us in the struggle of independence
And when we got it they were forgotten.

Some of them were killed by the extremists
Some were overthrown by the opportunists
Ceremony of changing guards at the tombs!
But is it enough for the great selfless activists?

The great men who were the men of principles,
The ideals they gave to their sincere disciples!
Ignored and forgotten by the selfish might
And law! It justified undemocratic cripples!

What a law is Law of Necessity, just a fun,
Love child of Miss Pen and Mr. Mighty Gun,
A justice who takes dictations becomes malice
A pen controlled by gun becomes a pun!

If any color we see if any aroma we feel still
It's coming from the tombs it's not from a drill
Hippocratic celebrations do not prove anything
You have forgotten them; your drill lacks the thrill!

Forgotten Unforgotten
Monday, May 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hypocrisy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini shibu 28 May 2018

If any color we see if any aroma we feel still It's coming from the tombs..Great poem

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Susan Williams 28 May 2018

An extraordinary intelligent examination of what is, sad to say, the prevalent attitudes in many countries.

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Kelly Kurt 28 May 2018

I am proud to call you friend.

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Mj Lemon 28 May 2018

Social commentary with great vision....a great work, Akhtar.

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A brilliant poem that bites on hypocrisy. Liked the fourth stanza. A powerful write for the men who sacrificed their lives for the country.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 May 2018

JUST so beautifully PENNED as usual EXCEPTIONAL friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

A thought provoking piece of work! Appreciated the way you have abstracted the theme! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Perdita Young 29 May 2018

Very impressive poem about the differences between the hypocrites and truly great, a cruel social reality. Every line is a quotable line worth sharing.10++++++Perdita

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Valsa George 29 May 2018

Unfortunately those great men who shed their blood and got killed to protect our nation and safeguard our freedom are sadly and cruelly forgotten! We live in a world of ingratitude! A powerful write!

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