Fortress Poem by Valerie Dohren

So lovely poem, thus we can use this poem to break all fortress we found in our life..so inspiring! _Soul

A lovely poem as ever! ! One day the fortress shall surely crumble and fall and our souls shall witness greater radiance! A 10 for this excellent write! !

I love this, as usual. Mind you, if you keep your soul locked away, how will we all see the beauty therein?

Amazing flow and cadence, reading this out loud was like dripping the honey of a rainbow, your language was perfect and elegant. Sometimes people built fortress to protect themselves from the years of pain. But all walls must come down eventually. A delightful read

Exquisite! Beyond awesome! I'm intimately familiar with such walls.

To coin a phrase, Beautifully Written. It's amazing how we illustrate the heart so differently and yet they paint the very same picture! ! I love it, and Thank you! ! Rick Elpers

an elegant poem, such words of beautiful great job

Encaged soul seeking to escape the worldly glare, yet longing for warmth of true love's sunshine. Beautifully written.

Excellent Valerie, I love this poem too

Absolute concept of a mysterious fortress that is more than image! Now begins Madam Valerie, your need for maintenances of it that cost a lot, I fear